Cabzx's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Admincraft 4]

Pretty nice. Good quality piece. Looking forward to the next installment!

I recommend.

[Saving Cats]

I liked that you used sound effects for stuff like raising eyebrows. Keep doing that. I think you need to work on the animation at the end, where the tree falls. You should build to it, take your time to draw detail in the tree movement. Also, add a preloader and a play button.

[I'm gonna jump]

I get it. The mouth is too far back. When it opens and the characters speaks it should open a little more to the front of the face not to the back.

["Semi-Respectable" Show - Episode 3 "The Human Resource"]

I don't like how everyone seems to be looking at a void. Is that an artistic decision? Because the art is quite simplistic almost ugly and I don't think such a decision helps.

SemiRespectable responds:

OK, well like I wrote it was episode 2, and things were being learned. I agree about the looking it was a choice but not a good one, so in later episodes, eye movements etc got better & more specific. As for the "ugly" art, that's a choice, I think it's quite good for the stories & whatnot so there we disagree. You'll become a fan eventually, it'll be great.

[P-man]

The voice of the woman is quite hard to hear. I think you could work on your animation. The arm was too stiff while hitting the man.

I recommend.

WavingPear responds:

fair comments - something to work on for next time. Thanks for the review!:)

[Video Games and Health]

Sound needs some work. It spikes here and there it's hard to discern words.

I recommend.

Eggabeg responds:

Shit microphone and some latent Scottish heritage I'm afraid :V
Thank you very much!

[Cereal]

Voice is hard to understand. Characters are too stiff, and it doesn't seem intentional.

I don't recommend.

[TidBits 10 - The Food Chain]

Animation style is nice, I do think that, in the last scene, when the bug enters the bear's mouth, the animation was to simple. I think you can do better motuh movements and the bug could be less stiff. I do keep saying that voices are too similar and sometimes hard to discern.

[TidBits 11 The Dodos]

I like the animation and the style, I don't like how similar the voices are to each other. I guess it is something for season two, maybe?

I recommend

normchipmunkIII responds:

Which 2 voices are similar?