I have come to appreciate your aninmation. There are a couple of things I didn't like. The voices seem to have some noice, they sound bobbly like if they had a lot of bass applied to them. I think the animation is solid. It stays consistent but there are some parts that have different levels in quality.
I recommend.
I got my cintiq while I was making it, I noticed a jump in quality. Sorry about that. Also I'd gotten better as the animation progressed.
Next one should be consistent though. :p
Pretty nice. Good quality piece. Looking forward to the next installment!
I recommend.
I liked that you used sound effects for stuff like raising eyebrows. Keep doing that. I think you need to work on the animation at the end, where the tree falls. You should build to it, take your time to draw detail in the tree movement. Also, add a preloader and a play button.
So, the following is in order. Sound, the author needs to get a better microphone, there is a lot of clipping and noise in the voice. Art direction, either keep the whole thing with a single style or provide reasons for the change in appearance, for the parts when the color dissapears or when you decide to remove detail. Grammar, what you write in your animation isn't a message that someone is going to ignore; it is going to be watched by most likely thousands of people, if you don't use proper grammar, or again, provide a reason not to, your animation won't be taken seriously. If you can't take your animation seriously enough like to write properly or verify your grammar, I don't see a reason anyone else should.
I don't recommend.
Thanks for the feedback! Sorry you didn't like it! But ya know, can't please everyone! :) I built off this feedback and hopefully improve! Right now I'm really crappy at animating since I just starting doing it so hopefully I can improve, I'll take your feedback to hard and use your advice to improve in those areas! Thanks! :D
-Noah
P.S. The reason there was clipping in the mic is because the video is edited and sometimes he does jump cuts if there's silence and so the video won't completely silent for the whole time. Anyway thanks for the feedback! I will hopefully improve overtime but ya know. Sorry I couldn't please ya! Thanks for the advice on improving though.
I get it. The mouth is too far back. When it opens and the characters speaks it should open a little more to the front of the face not to the back.
I don't like how everyone seems to be looking at a void. Is that an artistic decision? Because the art is quite simplistic almost ugly and I don't think such a decision helps.
OK, well like I wrote it was episode 2, and things were being learned. I agree about the looking it was a choice but not a good one, so in later episodes, eye movements etc got better & more specific. As for the "ugly" art, that's a choice, I think it's quite good for the stories & whatnot so there we disagree. You'll become a fan eventually, it'll be great.
The voice of the woman is quite hard to hear. I think you could work on your animation. The arm was too stiff while hitting the man.
I recommend.
fair comments - something to work on for next time. Thanks for the review!:)
Sound needs some work. It spikes here and there it's hard to discern words.
I recommend.
Shit microphone and some latent Scottish heritage I'm afraid :V
Thank you very much!
Voice is hard to understand. Characters are too stiff, and it doesn't seem intentional.
I don't recommend.
Animation style is nice, I do think that, in the last scene, when the bug enters the bear's mouth, the animation was to simple. I think you can do better motuh movements and the bug could be less stiff. I do keep saying that voices are too similar and sometimes hard to discern.
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