Dosn't really look like an M submission, T should have sufficed. You should work on making clean lines with clean colors.
Dosn't really look like an M submission, T should have sufficed. You should work on making clean lines with clean colors.
Very unexpected. Very well placed effort into the animation.
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Animation could be a little bit more fluid, although it might be an artistic decision.
It is decidedly so :0)
Keep it up!
I like you take on Mario characters as 20 year-olds. It is fresh.
The CRT filter is missing the scanlines and the back glow.
bro it isn’t a filter, I recorded it on an actual CRT 😭
Maybe the author should try to animate stories made by someone else.
in your dreams pal
Voicework and audio needs some work. Maybe try looking at hiring professional voice actors.
It is a little bit to random for my taste. I do like that the animation is fluid.
Thanks for the solid and fair review! I can’t say that any of my other toons would be better for you because “random comedy” is just about all I know/do now. But maybe check out my Fall Guys parody! A lot of people liked that one because it actually has somewhat of a story haha. Enjoy your day!
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