Cabzx's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[HearthStone - The Animation #1]

I find this animation entertainning. There is a lot to improve in animating limbs as characters look stiff.

[Yuki-chan 9 (Kaorimonogatari)]

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I recommend.

[Do this how I want you to]

I'd like to see more of this. Maybe use the character in some animation or a follow up video to this scene. All in all, what I would really like is some characters to relate with. Not that this is bad, considering your videos, but I would like to see how you deal with character development in the animated form.

I recommend.

[Cupcakes]

Right after the first cupcake is presented the scene stalls. It seems intentional, but makes the viewer think the video has stopped loading. You may want to look into it.

I recommend.

[Hardcore Brony]

I think the girl could have been introduced into the scene gentlier.

I recommend this animation.

[Cover Up Dat Booty!]

This animation is executed well. I should say the jokes do get old, and you seem to use the same jokes over different animations. This may affect the improvement of your work.

I recommend this.

[E-Fame Survival Guide]

I liked most of the animation. It was very funny. Unfortunately right at the end the animator got real lazy and presented a low quality scene, with no moving parts.

I recommend this.

[Red XIII Getting Dirty! - FFVII Parody]

Nice animation. I think the author needs to work a little bit more in the jumpling animation. I recommend.

Crunchlins responds:

Thanks for watching!

I'll be honest, I didn't have very long to make this, so it's not got the ideal amount of frame by frame animation :)

I have to take a few shortcuts to release cartoons every 2 weeks ^_^
Thanks for the feedback!

[Indivisible]

Of course. Some work is needed in the illustration of the bird. It doesn't seem to be moving naturally. Clapping should be done with the palm of the hand not the fingers. The sound should conceit to either.

frass70 responds:

thanks for the advice but ill admit i already know all of that i was just in a rush that i threw everything out the window and said fuck it the bird shall hump and we shall clap with our fingertips lol

[#YoutubeRed]

Simple animation, not much to say. I recommend.