Well executed, I hope to see more like this.
Well executed, I hope to see more like this.
Solid piece, I have to say that I didn't like that you used rap as the music type, I think it is limited.
This is awesome, please keep up the good work.
I recommend.
Sound quality is low. The scene with the old mand, herbert, his teeth change color to blue in some frames.
Yeah, this was actually an animated clip of someone else's video, so it wasn't scripted, he requested me to animate that for a collab, thanks for your feedback.
A nice little animation. I think the jokes are paced correctly and make fun.
I recommend.
I think more authors should do stuff like this.
So yeah man, your woman anathomy is a little bit off. Mainly the crotch, it seems to show stuff that isn't there, too many lines to high to protuding. You may want to check on some picture of woman crutches as seen from pants, its hard to see anything even on very tigh pants. That said, I didn't enjoy the slight art change at the middle of the movie, where you stopped used pencil drawings and went with a kind of aquarela style, that didn't work from my perspective.
I believe this animators problem is like of direction of his work. Jokes and story are ussually non existance or just mashed together. I recommend working in collaboration with other animators maybe even writters to improve his performance.
Seems accurate. I can't write for shit hahaha
It was too fast paced, it could have used a better joke at the end. Maybe the kid could have thrown his controller out the window or something like that.
Yeah this is a perfect example of my poor writing skills. It was mainly for my own practice on flash CC
Little piece could use some more views, to better determine the public sentiment on it.
You have quite thorough feedback and I enjoy it, thank you for your contributions
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