I think this is underrated. I laughed a lot and the artwork and animations are solid.
I think this is underrated. I laughed a lot and the artwork and animations are solid.
Thank you! :> although let's be honest, the designs are mostly from fnf lol
Be careful with the typeface. Not looking good in high definition.
yeah :[ I'm not quite sure what happened to it there
Awesome.
Keep working on it.
I felt animation a little bit stiff, specially when characters are talking, it seems that a simple mouth animation is used.
I like the fanservice scenes.
Something that you might want to work on is the composition of your scenes. A little variety could go a long way and you seem to use a lot of full-shots when cowboy-shots or three-quarters might be more appropiate. In general not a fan of the group shots either, the execution of the triangle composition for example is way too cramped and some scenes have to much weight on some sides.
Valid complaints. :)
Liked the ending a lot. Very well animated and great use of effects.
Really loving the art. The story is a bit weak, but it has its ups and downs. Voice acting also needs some work.
PG-13 is most likely Teen. Newgrounds is not Youtube in that regard. I think you need more frames for some scenes. Also, not a fan of the jiggly camera, I do not think these simple static scenes need that.
Definetly a solid animation. Selected typefaces do bring it down, they are too generic. Try a site like Blambot or Iconian Fonts.
Animation needs to be more fluid. But I think you should work in developing your illustration style first.
okay, sorry, all the work was done by me ;-;
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