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I think this is underrated. I laughed a lot and the artwork and animations are solid.

Metallis responds:

Thank you! :> although let's be honest, the designs are mostly from fnf lol

Be careful with the typeface. Not looking good in high definition.

Metallis responds:

yeah :[ I'm not quite sure what happened to it there

Awesome.

Keep working on it.

I felt animation a little bit stiff, specially when characters are talking, it seems that a simple mouth animation is used.

I like the fanservice scenes.

Something that you might want to work on is the composition of your scenes. A little variety could go a long way and you seem to use a lot of full-shots when cowboy-shots or three-quarters might be more appropiate. In general not a fan of the group shots either, the execution of the triangle composition for example is way too cramped and some scenes have to much weight on some sides.

WooleyWorld responds:

Valid complaints. :)

Liked the ending a lot. Very well animated and great use of effects.

Really loving the art. The story is a bit weak, but it has its ups and downs. Voice acting also needs some work.

PG-13 is most likely Teen. Newgrounds is not Youtube in that regard. I think you need more frames for some scenes. Also, not a fan of the jiggly camera, I do not think these simple static scenes need that.

Definetly a solid animation. Selected typefaces do bring it down, they are too generic. Try a site like Blambot or Iconian Fonts.

Animation needs to be more fluid. But I think you should work in developing your illustration style first.

ivoelpibe15 responds:

okay, sorry, all the work was done by me ;-;

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