Voice acting needs work, some parts are louder than others. I got a couple of jokes, maybe you should try going slow in some parts and faster in others, so as to create pase.
I recommend.
Voice acting needs work, some parts are louder than others. I got a couple of jokes, maybe you should try going slow in some parts and faster in others, so as to create pase.
I recommend.
It seems that overall pacing is a thing people noticed about this entry, so I'm glad to know that's something I should work on. Also you're right that audio wasn't equalized like it should have been.
thanks for the review!
Entertainning. Animation was a little too rocky, like lacking fliudity. Also I couldn't completely enjoy looping jokes.
Very excellent animation, excellent execution.
I recommend!
Would have loved to see the full rendered animation. It was funny either way.
I recommend.
I liked it.
I recommend other people watch it.
Don't really like it. The joke doesn't work for me. And art looks lazy.
Kind of works, its a shame it ends in such a short notice.Try making the flash sofisticated by adding menus and credits.
Yeah i'm really new to animating, but i've seen a lot of people even have loading menus and i just didn't know how to get those on, but I'll look them up and get that stuff on there for the next animation i put together. But thanks for the feedback :)!
Voice is too low, also seems to need treatment.
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