Voice seems to require some work. Overall was a cool little piece.
Voice seems to require some work. Overall was a cool little piece.
I can't understand what is going on. Try making a story board and take some time with every frame, make sure you are providing the scene that you want people to see. Also add some sounds and music.
I don't recommend.
Yeah, I know. This one's kinda old and crappy.
I might consider remaking it, though. We'll see :3
Animation was fluid, but there were some problems with proportion during movement.
Thanks! This is rather old, so I have improved since. But thanks again for the advice anyway!
Animation doesn't look fluid, try adding more frames.
I don't recommend.
It kind of works, but I couldn't find it funny.
I don't recommend.
Sorry to hear you didn't like it. If you could, maybe message me what you specifically didn't like? I'd like to improve.
Its ok. Maybe try adding a catchy tune.
It's ok.
Good, but the sword seems to loose width during the camera movement.
I recommend.
Animation could be slicker when exiting the coffee shop.
I recommend.
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