The piece seems unnecesarily dark. Maybe try tonning up lights.
I recommend.
The piece seems unnecesarily dark. Maybe try tonning up lights.
I recommend.
Great, I see a lot of inspiration from American Dad and Family Guy. Jokes resonate well with the world. Animation and sound great too.
Please watch, I recommend.
I loved it! An awesome animation and a great story. Fulfilling plot and everything. There is one complain, I know, I know, its no big deal really. Its about the window crashing scene, near the end. I think it didn't cut it. Either way, I recommend, please watch if you read this review!
Good animation.
I recommend.
Animation is well done. I like your great art style. Jokes seem to work.
I recommend.
I don't like the way yoshi is drawn he seems like a fat guy with a tail and really thin appendages. I don't really get the jokes, they are too obvious and too rushed. Also, you draw nice girls.
You need to add effect sounds. Remember that stuff make noise and sounds when they interact, pay attention to this in the real world and try to apply it to your animation.
In the real world?
I thought you were talking about sfx like in Ed Ed n Eddy.
My girlfriend told me to add more sfx, but I felt like they were too annoying. Maybe I chose the wrong sound effects to use.
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Panama
Joined on 4/4/07