Use button boxes, instead of activating the letters in the words, it is really hard to make a selection like that. I was about to laugh right there when the fist broke the youtube video window, but the joke was not ready so I couldn't.
Use button boxes, instead of activating the letters in the words, it is really hard to make a selection like that. I was about to laugh right there when the fist broke the youtube video window, but the joke was not ready so I couldn't.
Hm.... sorry about that, but I'm not quite clear on what you mean... activating the letters in the words? Do you mean highlighting the text, or something? I'm confused XD
Don't really get the jokes. But it looks that some effor was put into it. Maybe try adding higher quality sounds too?
yeah you're right, i dont know what it is but it whont uppload in Hq (sound included)
so i upploaded it to youtube if you whant to watch it in HQ...
Its a little shallow, not really funny.
Art should be crispier. Art style and animation need attention. Try adding more frames, so that movement doesn't seem unrelated.
I recommend.
It was funny, I wish there was more.
I recommend.
I think the short is nice. The art style is well executed. Maybe take more notice of sounds, I think there was a slight lsync issue when the female barbarian grunted.
I recommend.
Thank you very much! The characters were only meant to do small grunts at first, but we added words and oher stuff at the end, it worked better. It may have clashed a little with the lipsync that was already there. But we're better prepared for episode two!
Nice. Everything went smooth. I recommend.
Try working in collabs, its hard to evaluate small pieces like this.
Yeah, I'm hoping to make a compilation video or a more continous longer piece soon.
I don't think the cut out art works correctly.
Can you elaborate?
Take some time to work with proportions. Fist, hands and arms aren't drawn correctly and, if not done for fun, don't really work.
I don't recommend.
I definitely do this for fun. I know it sucks, but it's also old. My proportions did kinda suck back then, but I'm much better at it now. Thanks for the advice, though. :3
I'm still uploading new stuff; this one's not that great, but I have some better stuff coming up real soon.
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