Cabzx's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Asteroids Game Prototype]

This game works and I enjoyed it. I believe you could add ome MIDI like music to keep in theme. I recommend playing this game.

Catpixels responds:

I couldn't find anything at the time ^^;

[The Non-Scary Maze Game 2]

The game earns its place in newgrounds. I give a 3 star rating because I feel that it lacks polish.

spartan2744 responds:

What do you mean by 'polish'?

[Easy Flash Tutorial 05]

Need revising, all around

"Easy Flash Tutorial 05" by Danishx83 is a semi-interactive flash tutorial that targets beginning animators that are trying to teach themselfs how to animate on Macromedia Flash MX. The fifth installment in the series by the author covers the "insert" menu and gives an insight of every option in the menu. Danishx83 makes an effort to explain everything in detail.

I have found some issues trying to enjoy the tutorial. First the Flash Window image. I suggest the author consider changing the image he used for the Flash Window for something with better resolution as it's hard to understand even in expanded view. Second, add more images. I consider the tutorial needs more example images of the different options; say, when I click on layer what happens on the window I am working? What is affected and such could be easily explain with a couple of images. Third, explain a little more. I have found that you don't give enough info on the terms you use. Explainning the meaning of frame and scene among others could make the person reading the tutorial learn more fluently. I recommend adding a glossary of terms to solve this.

Last note; it's a good tutorial I am sure that when the author works through the issues it would be a better experience. Also, please consider grammar revising there are some obviuos grammar mistakes.

Ratings:
7/10
3/5

danishx83 responds:

Thank you for such a detailed review,
I have actually saved it in file with me for my next tutorial, you shall see some of changes you mentioned in next if not all of them.
Thanks again.

[Invasion Tactical Defense]

Was good...

A good game but I felt that I had too little control over my units. I also think that you should add more units than just cannos, and better backgrounds.

DuMondE-nl responds:

Ok, thanks for the review.