Please add a loader, reviewing this was more complicatedd than what it should have been.
Please add a loader, reviewing this was more complicatedd than what it should have been.
This video actually uploaded wrong for some reason, I'm going to delete it and upload it again as soon as I can.
Add a loading screen to so that I know when to press play. I didn't like the "not give up" theme makes the animation feel generic and uninspired. The music feels unfitting. If it is a master-teacher fight maybe a trainning music. Its a nice try and I am giving it a straight 3.
Sorry, dude. I hadn't heard of Newgrounds by the time i finished this, and i just thought it was a pretty epic song to add of a fight. Thanks for the tips, though.
I like it most of it. But I am giving it a three because I couldn't find this funny, and I really dislike the voice acting. Get a better microphone or recording device.
Its actually well done with some potential. But It is too short. I wonder if it will make the cut with its 4 second span.
thanks! I know, sad its so short but this is our first assigned animation so he didnt want to make it too long because he (the teacher) knew we would have trouble.
our final is a min and 30 seconds, I am gonna do a story with her and a werewolf, and try to keep the same quality if not better
I felt this is very strong movie, but I didn't like the narration voice. i understand you were trying for a kind of laid back voice but I believe that didn't quite make it. Try for a different pitch maybe a younger (not child) voice.
I recommend this movie.
Well, I wasn't going for a laid-back voice, but I'll try to improve :)
Load Screen is really small, make it larger.
Scene art seems unrefined.
I got bored fast.
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Great movie. I recommend watching this.
It may not be the best ever but this is well drawn and overall it earns its place.
I guess it does the job.
Extremely negative response.
This is my extremely negative response to your flash, sir.
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