My rating.
So I made a review for your flash.
Presentaiton: It was done with a good bit of how this is supposed to be done. 6/10
Interface: No buttons, no nothing. 2/10
Sound: Well you get credits here. Great blasting and fighting sounds mised with narration. 8/10
Music: Even though a little low it was good and well selected. 7/10
Graphics: Now you did a great job here, but some animations were dull and moving chraracter looked thin. 6/10
Art: Well that wasn't that bad good use of textures and shadows. 7/10
Overall (out of 10): 6/10
Clossing comments: I hope you get better on this thing.