Well this isn't precisely better than the last one
As you must know the first one was better.
Presentation: Well it was pretty lame as you need more practice. 5/10
Interface: I would liked some interface buttons you know advance, a menu but there was none actually. 3/10
Sound: Well there were some good effects, but the voice acting wasn't clear enough as its volume was non-continuos. 6/10
Music: Well you need some help in music as the mix is actually a little annoying. 6/10
Graphics: Try working in overall characters style. 6/10
Art: Focusing on what you need help is good. The backgrounds for the sky were lame. But most of the land backgrounds were cool. I think you have to take care of the effects, as you know I am talking about the frezzing effects and the light/shadow. 4/10
Overall (out of 10): 5/10
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