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Backgrounds need some more work.

Be careful with your export configuration.

Max197620201 responds:

Yes

Hands look strange. Animation feels forced in some scenes.

Art direction needs help. The video has some good ideas. Read up on composition and storyboarding.

Work on your synchronization.

robc0d responds:

I bet you noticed the plane in the background too, smart guy.

Art direction is not good. You should draw better. Try practicing a little bit more. Scenes and transitions are too stiff, make sure to read up on silhouttes and storyboarding for animations.

RoguePlanet responds:

Well, there's no way you could've watched the whole thing already at the time of writing your comment. But still, fair.
Thanks for the criticism, I'm going to look into improving my transitions in the future.
I've also been looking up storyboarding so I can better exemplify scenes to my artists, so that's a really good tip. Thanks!

Voice acting needs some work.

Jabloobies responds:

Yeah I need to spend more time practicing and also up my audio quality too

Animation is solid, crisp and clean. What program did you use for this?

You need to work on your artwork, this has that "amateur anime" look and feel.

teemovsall responds:

it was done in 5 days with sound and everything, good enough for one person I think.

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