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The editing needs some work, it is sometimes hard to follow what is going on.

Try working a little bit more on the backgrounds they look stale and a little out of place when compared to the character animations.

I like this animation it is well drawn and animated. Kudos to the lip synchronization, great work there.

Writing needs some work. Female character's dialogue doesn't feel natural.

I like the frog animation.

The surprise scene has no buildup so it looses some impact. Try adding a previous scene showing the house that the narrator mentions and then insert the scene for a better effect.

Clusterskulls responds:

I made this short animation on a whim,but I probably spent more time on the last scene than the animation itself... and I thought about giving it an alternate NSFW ending,but Maple is a Bear Cub and I don't draw those kinds of things.

I also thought about making the ending animated,which would have made it better,but thank you for leaving a comment :)

Edit: Sorry this reply was all over the place,I had just woken up when I wrote it.

The art style is not my cup of tea, but I can appreciate that the animation and illustration were done diligently. The music is also very well placed and specific, although a little bit generic.

Quite charming. The art style and music fit the theme well.

A favorite of many redone excellently by many up and coming artists. I recommend.

Try not to abuse gradients and shadow effects. The scenes without the effect look better than the ones that do.

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