Cabzx's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Master Roho's Training]

Add a loading screen to so that I know when to press play. I didn't like the "not give up" theme makes the animation feel generic and uninspired. The music feels unfitting. If it is a master-teacher fight maybe a trainning music. Its a nice try and I am giving it a straight 3.

theamazingjamez responds:

Sorry, dude. I hadn't heard of Newgrounds by the time i finished this, and i just thought it was a pretty epic song to add of a fight. Thanks for the tips, though.

[Red]

Its actually well done with some potential. But It is too short. I wonder if it will make the cut with its 4 second span.

Midgard229 responds:

thanks! I know, sad its so short but this is our first assigned animation so he didnt want to make it too long because he (the teacher) knew we would have trouble.

our final is a min and 30 seconds, I am gonna do a story with her and a werewolf, and try to keep the same quality if not better

[Mario Meets Kirby]

I felt this is very strong movie, but I didn't like the narration voice. i understand you were trying for a kind of laid back voice but I believe that didn't quite make it. Try for a different pitch maybe a younger (not child) voice.

I recommend this movie.

JonBro responds:

Well, I wasn't going for a laid-back voice, but I'll try to improve :)

[Everything You Know Is Wrong]

Nothing much is just too much.

I liked it. Naturaly I don't really like this kind of music things but this one is sepcial you truly deserve the score.

Something thst wasn't clear maybe you can help me out:
what does FYI mean?
Name of the song?

RWappin responds:

For your information. I talking about the epilepsy thing.

[Metroid: Rogue Formula]

Need to work on art!

I see that you have a lot of talent but you, you just seem like a slacker... get to work!

Presentation: From the begging you see some minor flaws but you see them. 7/10

Interface: No pause, no continue, to fast like to read text. 6/10

Sound: Well you had good sincro but no voice acting. 6/10

Music: Well actually you only had sync music. Add some author and original music. 6/10

Graphics: Sprites, it isn't really easy to get things well done with sprites, nd you didn't even make here walk... 4/10

Art: Well you had some good animations, great fighting scene. 8/10

Overall (out of 10): 5/10

Clossing comments: Get to work!

cap123 responds:

hey thanks, i was just looking over my old submissions and i thought you got it down to a tee. Thanks for the honest review, i haven't made anything since but if i do ever make anything else, i'll take all this into consideration.

[A New Bunny]

Uhhh...

It was a little disgusting.

Presentaiton: Too much words. It was cool at the beggining but then you exagerated. 5/10

Interface: NO actual advance, pause , navgation bar. 2/10

Sound: Well it was a little confusing as there were voices and background voices. 3/10

Music: NO good music. 1/10

Graphics: I must say you really draw well. I won't give you credit for the stolen material. 6/10

Art: Well there were no good effects. 3/10

Overall (out of 10): 4/10

Clossing comments: You better start taking stuff seriously.

tlgmedia responds:

Let's look at this one line by line shall we?

Presentation: You have absolutely no attention span, do you?

Interface: So? It's three minutes long. I didn't realize that the lack of a nav bar would be a point of contention for anyone.

Sound: There's only one person talking at any given moment. Once again, I think you lack an attention span.

Music: No, there was no music at all, because it didn't need any.

Graphics: Goddammit, it's not like I'm trying to pass off ALL the art as our own. And it's very obvious when the graphics on screen aren't something we drew.

Art: How is this different from Graphics?

Overall (out of 10): This is a terrible review. You get hung up on things that are superfluous to the animation itself, you don't even touch on the content, and you completely fail to justify the unreasonably low scores.

Closing comments: Is that a threat?

[Under Judgement]

Let me tell you, sometimes there are geat flashes.

So I must follow the story of a SWF?

Presentaiton: Cool you had great menus and absolutly awesome effects. 8/10

Interface: Well you had nothing mora than a play button... 1/10

Sound: Actually you had great bullet effect. 7/10

Music: I had never heard that music before but believe me I like it. You coudn't have chosen a better music. 7/10

Graphics: Somtime the simpler the better. 7/10

Art: I liked the line rider effect, and the flying zeros were great. 8/10

Overall (out of 10): 7/10

Clossing comments: One of Newgrounds best flash.

M4KBOT responds:

thank you for taking the time to write this review, I appreciate it!

[PokBmon]

Does not deserves to be here.

Why doesn´t someone makes a collection out of this stuff. Find others that have done B flashes and get them all in one flash movie.

Presentaiton: 0/10

Interface: 2/10

Sound: 0/10

Music: 0/10

Graphics: 1/10

Art: 0.5/10

Overall (out of 10): 1/10

Clossing comments: Try my suggestion.

jonthomson responds:

You fail at the whole concept of clock day, don't you? Take your 1/10 and go die in a fire, you mudkip hating piece of shit.

[The Console Matrix]

A good flash trailer.

There is a need of good trailers here at newgrounds. I hope to see the real deal some time soon. Work on sound and in shadow effects. Those two are the ones that I see people having more troubles with.

Killit666 responds:

I couldn't make the sound any better cause it was taken directly from The Matrix Revolutions trailer. The sound was also being streamed so it would sync with the animation. We all know that streaming the music makes it lower quality as well. I know I didn't work on any shadow effects but if you think about it, I didn't make any effects at all. Thanks for reviewing. :) Anyway, this trailer movie was just made for fun and it didn't get popular. There's no need to make an actual series on it.