Cabzx's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[GG animated: Boobtech¨]

Don't really get the jokes. But it looks that some effor was put into it. Maybe try adding higher quality sounds too?

Afreakingtaco responds:

yeah you're right, i dont know what it is but it whont uppload in Hq (sound included)
so i upploaded it to youtube if you whant to watch it in HQ...

[Shieldmaiden Part One]

I think the short is nice. The art style is well executed. Maybe take more notice of sounds, I think there was a slight lsync issue when the female barbarian grunted.

I recommend.

PiratePudding responds:

Thank you very much! The characters were only meant to do small grunts at first, but we added words and oher stuff at the end, it worked better. It may have clashed a little with the lipsync that was already there. But we're better prepared for episode two!

[King Shit]

Try working in collabs, its hard to evaluate small pieces like this.

2Fraimz responds:

Yeah, I'm hoping to make a compilation video or a more continous longer piece soon.

[WIshing Hole]

I don't think the cut out art works correctly.

DeadWeightPictures responds:

Can you elaborate?

[Punch Fails]

Take some time to work with proportions. Fist, hands and arms aren't drawn correctly and, if not done for fun, don't really work.

I don't recommend.

Agent64 responds:

I definitely do this for fun. I know it sucks, but it's also old. My proportions did kinda suck back then, but I'm much better at it now. Thanks for the advice, though. :3

I'm still uploading new stuff; this one's not that great, but I have some better stuff coming up real soon.

[The Crash]

I can't understand what is going on. Try making a story board and take some time with every frame, make sure you are providing the scene that you want people to see. Also add some sounds and music.

I don't recommend.

Agent64 responds:

Yeah, I know. This one's kinda old and crappy.

I might consider remaking it, though. We'll see :3

[The REAL Way to Battle]

Animation was fluid, but there were some problems with proportion during movement.

Agent64 responds:

Thanks! This is rather old, so I have improved since. But thanks again for the advice anyway!

[Markipliers Five Nights]

It kind of works, but I couldn't find it funny.

I don't recommend.

TheWitchBoi responds:

Sorry to hear you didn't like it. If you could, maybe message me what you specifically didn't like? I'd like to improve.

[Sex Hair II The Woolening]

Animation could be slicker when exiting the coffee shop.

I recommend.

WooleyWorld responds:

Thought you were leaving NewGrounds...

[Mark Gets Mad!]

I think shadows need work, mostly in the faces. It is hard to distinguish the neck from the chin and the limits of the mouth.

M4KBOT responds:

Thanks for the tip dude! I'll look into that.