I like the payoff of the hammer.
I like the payoff of the hammer.
Try adding a scene where the two characters meet or at least one where one characters reacts to the other.
Some of the jokes are very forced. Try dialing it down a little, and rely more on the reactions.
Sometimes less is more, as proved by this piece.
Very good series. You may want to up the realism by checking what may have been possible in the hardware.
Very cool, like what you are doing with the series. Maybe try taking it forward (or have someone else take it forward).
Voice acting needs more work.
Some designs need improvement. Not a fan of the script or the dialogues, does not feel natural.
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