Cabzx's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Box Factory: You Take My Breath Away]

I believe this animators problem is like of direction of his work. Jokes and story are ussually non existance or just mashed together. I recommend working in collaboration with other animators maybe even writters to improve his performance.

GingerPale responds:

Seems accurate. I can't write for shit hahaha

[Mario Party in a Nutshell]

It was too fast paced, it could have used a better joke at the end. Maybe the kid could have thrown his controller out the window or something like that.

GingerPale responds:

Yeah this is a perfect example of my poor writing skills. It was mainly for my own practice on flash CC

[Ditto Love]

Little piece could use some more views, to better determine the public sentiment on it.

GingerPale responds:

You have quite thorough feedback and I enjoy it, thank you for your contributions

[Pokemon Daycare (Parody)]

Joke needs focus, what is it I am supposed to be laughing at?

I recommend.

GingerPale responds:

This joke reaches out to Pokémon fans. The old joke is the fact skitty (A small cat) is able to have eggs with wailord, the largest Pokémon. Once again these animations are for my own practice. I appreciate your feedback.

[True Myths: Gilgamesh]

Nice, I don't like the voice over at the beginning, and for some reason you seem to have two different voices?

CubePunks responds:

This video had some difficulties when publishing.

When uploading the Newgrounds version, I accidently had the short's audio, and audio from an update for my YouTube channel, running at the same time. I noticed this issue and re-uploaded a corrected file before publishing.

How you found the faulty cut before I authenticated the corrected audio, I have no clue. Sorry for the inconvenience and please give the video a second chance.

-KMB

[POKÉMON GO GET A LIFE (Pokémon Go Song)]

Great. Very easy to like.

I recommend.

MarcyVF responds:

ehehhhheh

[TD-I'm A Second Year]

The author needs to work on hands. Fingers sometimes look like claws and other times like mittens. The voice was also hard to stand.

Raziberry responds:

>the voice was also hard to stand
MISSION: ACCOMPLISHED

[Suntria and Sprout - Episode 1]

I like the characters and development. I think drawings could be clearer.

I recommend.

Ant0on responds:

Thank you! And you are very right, some scenes still hurt my eyes when I look back and think that I should have put more time in clean-up. The next episode is not going to be this messy!

[Red XIII Getting Dirty! - FFVII Parody]

Nice animation. I think the author needs to work a little bit more in the jumpling animation. I recommend.

Crunchlins responds:

Thanks for watching!

I'll be honest, I didn't have very long to make this, so it's not got the ideal amount of frame by frame animation :)

I have to take a few shortcuts to release cartoons every 2 weeks ^_^
Thanks for the feedback!

[Indivisible]

Of course. Some work is needed in the illustration of the bird. It doesn't seem to be moving naturally. Clapping should be done with the palm of the hand not the fingers. The sound should conceit to either.

frass70 responds:

thanks for the advice but ill admit i already know all of that i was just in a rush that i threw everything out the window and said fuck it the bird shall hump and we shall clap with our fingertips lol