Cabzx's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sakura's Love Letter]

Escalaion was quite unexpected. I think the author should work on developing better backgrounds.

exninja123 responds:

I totally agree with the background, need to work on that.

[Beat the Devil Out of It]

Kind of simple. The scene where the devil dies could use some sound work. Also Bob Ross's voice seems to have been taken from a finished source.

WooleyWorld responds:

Rofl. No shit? Astute observation, Hawking.

[What The XP ?!!]

Quite nice, the author spend some time making it rime and work. I recommend.

DIWAKAR responds:

Thanx..

[[MKWii] Episode 1 Gameplay [Mushroom Cup]]

So, a number of things. First this isn't a site to upload let's play videos. Unless they are parodies. There isn't a control here over that content and the site could face liabilities for showcasing this kind of material. Second, you should capture directly from the input not with some camera connected aiming at the screen and recroding. Third a 15 minute long video here is too long.

I don't recommend this and hope it gets blammed.

TKSgamer1386 responds:

i see sorry about that but thanks for you respone

[rAge of Mythology II]

I have come to appreciate your aninmation. There are a couple of things I didn't like. The voices seem to have some noice, they sound bobbly like if they had a lot of bass applied to them. I think the animation is solid. It stays consistent but there are some parts that have different levels in quality.

I recommend.

WooleyWorld responds:

I got my cintiq while I was making it, I noticed a jump in quality. Sorry about that. Also I'd gotten better as the animation progressed.
Next one should be consistent though. :p

[Beeniebomb Animated | How Beenie lost his medical license]

So, the following is in order. Sound, the author needs to get a better microphone, there is a lot of clipping and noise in the voice. Art direction, either keep the whole thing with a single style or provide reasons for the change in appearance, for the parts when the color dissapears or when you decide to remove detail. Grammar, what you write in your animation isn't a message that someone is going to ignore; it is going to be watched by most likely thousands of people, if you don't use proper grammar, or again, provide a reason not to, your animation won't be taken seriously. If you can't take your animation seriously enough like to write properly or verify your grammar, I don't see a reason anyone else should.

I don't recommend.

LasersMFG responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Sorry you didn't like it! But ya know, can't please everyone! :) I built off this feedback and hopefully improve! Right now I'm really crappy at animating since I just starting doing it so hopefully I can improve, I'll take your feedback to hard and use your advice to improve in those areas! Thanks! :D
-Noah
P.S. The reason there was clipping in the mic is because the video is edited and sometimes he does jump cuts if there's silence and so the video won't completely silent for the whole time. Anyway thanks for the feedback! I will hopefully improve overtime but ya know. Sorry I couldn't please ya! Thanks for the advice on improving though.

["Semi-Respectable" Show - Episode 3 "The Human Resource"]

I don't like how everyone seems to be looking at a void. Is that an artistic decision? Because the art is quite simplistic almost ugly and I don't think such a decision helps.

SemiRespectable responds:

OK, well like I wrote it was episode 2, and things were being learned. I agree about the looking it was a choice but not a good one, so in later episodes, eye movements etc got better & more specific. As for the "ugly" art, that's a choice, I think it's quite good for the stories & whatnot so there we disagree. You'll become a fan eventually, it'll be great.

[P-man]

The voice of the woman is quite hard to hear. I think you could work on your animation. The arm was too stiff while hitting the man.

I recommend.

WavingPear responds:

fair comments - something to work on for next time. Thanks for the review!:)

[Video Games and Health]

Sound needs some work. It spikes here and there it's hard to discern words.

I recommend.

Eggabeg responds:

Shit microphone and some latent Scottish heritage I'm afraid :V
Thank you very much!

[TidBits 11 The Dodos]

I like the animation and the style, I don't like how similar the voices are to each other. I guess it is something for season two, maybe?

I recommend

normchipmunkIII responds:

Which 2 voices are similar?