Cabzx's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kero Kero Groove - Tech Debt]

The CRT filter is missing the scanlines and the back glow.

tofokyo responds:

bro it isn’t a filter, I recorded it on an actual CRT 😭

[Dogs Without Babies]

Maybe the author should try to animate stories made by someone else.

foneycone responds:

in your dreams pal

[WHERE'S STEWIE? - (FAMILY GUY ANIMATED PARODY)]

It is a little bit to random for my taste. I do like that the animation is fluid.

SteakstixAnimations responds:

Thanks for the solid and fair review! I can’t say that any of my other toons would be better for you because “random comedy” is just about all I know/do now. But maybe check out my Fall Guys parody! A lot of people liked that one because it actually has somewhat of a story haha. Enjoy your day!

[Animal Crossing - Bears]

The surprise scene has no buildup so it looses some impact. Try adding a previous scene showing the house that the narrator mentions and then insert the scene for a better effect.

Clusterskulls responds:

I made this short animation on a whim,but I probably spent more time on the last scene than the animation itself... and I thought about giving it an alternate NSFW ending,but Maple is a Bear Cub and I don't draw those kinds of things.

I also thought about making the ending animated,which would have made it better,but thank you for leaving a comment :)

Edit: Sorry this reply was all over the place,I had just woken up when I wrote it.

[Ranger Rad]

You should work a little bit on your logo, it looks dirty. Try cleaning it up or maybe converting it fully into a digital format.

FenrirArtGEM responds:

I am already done with story and I do not care. I will take your "criticism" for later use to help. Thanks for commenting. If people actually helped out in the film business and not enslave people who cannot do this on their own, then movie would have looked better, but I rather just enjoy what I make with what I had, instead of lacking understanding why it is the way it is. If Hollywood was helpful, this movie would have been something else, but limited due to our boring focus group and political correct forces. Do well. I am glad I finished this so I can go work on other stories.

[Boss Battle - Asynchronous Jam Session]

It is hard to understand your voice, maybe consider getting a higher quality microphone.

doffu0000 responds:

Okay maybe I have to just talk clearer it's an extremely high quality microphone that I borrowed from my school (way out of my price range) so I doubt it's the mic and is more likely either my mixing or my voice. Thanks for letting me know though. I'll try and speak clearer next time and improve my mix.

[Millennials]

This has been said before, but I consider it a flaw of this video, so I will mention it again. The constant bleeps joke doesn't work. It makes the scene hard to understand and the noise is unbearable.

LeviRand responds:

The censor beeps weren't a joke. I'm a manager at a fortune 500 company, and this was posted to Youtube initially and shared on social media, for anyone who decided to snoop on my personal life to see, so I censored the cursing as a precaution. It wasn't necessary to do here, but I didn't render two versions. Maybe I'll do so and update this one. Maybe.

[Darthell Unleashed: Project Unleashed Comic series]

Comic like animation is a little bit lazy. You might want to consider limiting dialogue balloons to 25 words, and to use that many words sparingly.

David-O-N-Akwaeze responds:

Oh my god Thank you so much!! I was hoping someone would criticise my work! Yeah I definitely 1000% agree with you with the animation is a little bit lazy... The original animation had more movement, full lip syncing and so much more. the annoying thing was that I only had a limited amount of time to animate all of this because this was my FMP (Final Major project) for second years in college. I was pleased that I managed to pull of the animation, but was not satisfied with how the animation pulled out.

I am very happy for someone like you pointing out these stuff because I was originally going for a game trailer without the speech bubbles, but my teachers thought it would be best to make my work like a motion comic. (due to time) Also because my course didn't know jack about how to make games considering my course name said Computer animation and games level three I had to make it like this so yeah.

Thanks for the feedback! very much appiciated!! :p

[Forgotten]

The environment is well done. Otherwise this is a simple piece, witout any kind of merit.

deafguitarist063 responds:

Can you explain why this is piece without any kind of merit including 2 out of 5 stars, please? As for my goal of this project, I was hoping this environment give the viewers some kind of sad emotions and desire to walk into the room in the video game to search for the loot for the players as they walk by the room.

[Cleveland plays CS GO]

Sound quality is low. The scene with the old mand, herbert, his teeth change color to blue in some frames.

storytellerYT responds:

Yeah, this was actually an animated clip of someone else's video, so it wasn't scripted, he requested me to animate that for a collab, thanks for your feedback.