Cabzx's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Black History Thinker]

Animation is cool, but I don't think that this is enough for me to evaluate. Or for other people to enjoy. Maybe you can enjoy a longer piece?

alphonso-elm responds:

Thanks. This is my first submission to New Grounds so I was just testing the waters as it were.

[【JOMTOONS】- Walk]

Please provide actual content. While we are at it, please work on proportions understand that arms are completely off.

I don't recommend.

Jom responds:

Yeah the arms are all out of whack. Thanks.

[Awesome Guy Episode 1]

I think you need to develop further your style. I see that a there is a lot of effort invested in your pieces but overall your style isn't distinguishing from other artist, some of them with very little experience. So I hope you work on that. Yeah, also work on sounds, some stuff is too loud voices are too low. People are right, it looks more like a trailer than a real episode. Check HappyHarry's work for reference.

I am not sure I recommend.

TheUnseriousguy responds:

thanks for the criticism dude i appreciate it, but this is an old video and i have been working to improve on a lot of what you said

[Zero Dragon]

Voice and backgrounds need some work.

shadowcounter responds:

Backgrounds on the next one will be much better. Not very experienced with photoshop, so I'm still learning more.

[Game Grumps - Guy Fieri]

I think it is mostly lazy animation.

I don't recommend.

HystEric777 responds:

It is indeed lazy animation. But, do you think it's alright for a first attempt at animation for me?

[Ghost Summons Satan]

I don't get it. Animation was slick and so was voice acting.

I recommend.

CarelessShenanigans responds:

don't get whut?

[World's Greatest Manwhore]

I think you are developing this characters too much. It seems to me that the dialogue is not really working towards building the mythology around this characters. What I am trying to say is that you are humanising too much your characters and it affects previous storylines.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

sounds like i'm doing something right.

[Tim the salesman]

Voice acting needs work, some parts are louder than others. I got a couple of jokes, maybe you should try going slow in some parts and faster in others, so as to create pase.

I recommend.

Comicdud responds:

It seems that overall pacing is a thing people noticed about this entry, so I'm glad to know that's something I should work on. Also you're right that audio wasn't equalized like it should have been.

thanks for the review!

[A Snowman Who Gives Back]

Kind of works, its a shame it ends in such a short notice.Try making the flash sofisticated by adding menus and credits.

GingerPale responds:

Yeah i'm really new to animating, but i've seen a lot of people even have loading menus and i just didn't know how to get those on, but I'll look them up and get that stuff on there for the next animation i put together. But thanks for the feedback :)!

[PizzaPie]

Use button boxes, instead of activating the letters in the words, it is really hard to make a selection like that. I was about to laugh right there when the fist broke the youtube video window, but the joke was not ready so I couldn't.

Agent64 responds:

Hm.... sorry about that, but I'm not quite clear on what you mean... activating the letters in the words? Do you mean highlighting the text, or something? I'm confused XD